17 June, 2007
Trying to get something across
Posted by Nathan Hobby under McEwan - Ian, The comfort of strangers, conversation, exaggerationWith excited disregard for the state of play between them, Colin immediately set about recounting the little drama in the street below. She stood at the balcony wall, watching the sunset while he spoke. She did not shift her gaze when he gestured towards the young men at their table, but she nodded faintly. Colin could not reproduce the vague misunderstandings that constituted, according to him, the main interest of the story. Instead, he heard himself exaggerate its small pathos into vaudeville, perhaps in an attempt to gain Mary’s full attention. He described the elderly gentleman as ‘incredibly old and feeble’, his wife was ‘batty beyond belief’, the men at the table were ‘bovine morons’, and he made the husband give out ‘an incredible roar of fury’. In fact the word ‘incredible’ suggested itself to him at every turn, perhaps because he feared that Mary did not believe him, or because he did not believe himself. When he finished, Mary made a short’mm’ sound through a half smile.
- Ian McEwan, The Comfort of Strangers : 6
27 November, 2007 at 12:16 am
“…heard himself exaggerate its small pathos into vaudeville…” what do you think that the writer means through his choice of words “pathos” and “vaudeville”
28 November, 2007 at 6:24 pm
Hey KDS, I think McEwan is contrasting the reality of the situation (’pathos’ - which can’t be told very easily) with how the character had to end up telling it (’vaudeville’ - which is about all we can understand in conversation.)